A man passes his high school girlfriend on a crowded street in a large city. They haven't seen each other in 10 years, and to see each other is probably destiny, or something like that.
M: (Generic girl name)? Is that you?
W: O my gosh! (Generic boy name)!!!!
M: It's so good to see you! It's been...what? like 9 or 10 years?
W: (Laughs) Yeah something like that. What kept us from staying in touch for that long?!
M: Just Life I guess...I've been so busy..that's no excuse though, I'm sorry...
W: Don't be! It's just as much my fault as it is yours. Let's just be happy that it's happening now.
M: (Laughs) Ok that sounds good to me!
W: So what brings you to (generic large city)?
M: I'm actually here on business. I know it's crazy but I took that big corporate job, and now I guess I'm a part of the system.
W: Yikes! That's no good...what do you do?
M: Well right now I just work for a guy, who works for a guy, who works for the CEO's secretary. Did you get all that?
W: Let me think...um...so you're kissing ass for a living?
M: Haha i knew you'd catch on! Hey it's kinda cold out. Do you maybe wanna maybe get out of the snow and come get something to eat with me?
W: Ah. I wish i could! I'm sorry.. I'm meeting my fiance at somewhere at 9.
M: Fiance?
W: Yeah! After two years he finally had the nerve to ask!
M: Wow...that's um...that's great..
W: (laughs) Don't act too excited.
M: ha. yeah. Well hey I guess I better let you go then..
W: Yeah I guess so! It was so good to see you!
M: Yeah you too..
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I don't really like what I wrote about this scene..but i love this scene. Maybe i should be more descriptive about the scene..maybe i should let 'em know what he's feeling a little better. The action: they meet each other on a street after 10 years.
ReplyDeleteConflict: She's engaged. It leaves itself unresolved.
Eh maybe laters!
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